english help

...so my mom dropped by the blog and told me I need to use more paragraphs, that it is hard to read. Mom, didn't you see the part where I say how it's my blog, therefore I'll do whatever I gosh darn please? Anywho-I will try to be more user friendly in the future, but I make no promises, I write how I think and talk---sortof all jumbled and run together, but that's part of my charm, don'tcha think?